Editorial report 15a

Here is my first editorial report for the final self-reflection project.

ORIGINAL and REVISED Ethics paragraph

How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

• I completely reworded what I was trying to say. The content is the same, but the order is much more logical and the wording is much clearer.

How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

• I split the long paragraph into two and added citations.