Peer Review 14a for Alexis Morrison

This week's peer review features Alexis Morrison's Content Outline.

An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed

• I decided to make some outlining suggestions

An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how did you help them make their work better?)

• I tried to help Alexis by suggesting to put a broader context around her work. She already has a plan for her body paragraphs so I made some suggestions for her closing.

An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback

• The rubric says one can talk about their high school wrinting and ocmpare it to now and Alexis is doing that which is great. But it would be cool to explore the future of her writing too which she can explore in her closing, which I commented on.

One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from

• I like how Alexis is going to bring some previous work into her essay. I think it will be a really interesting comparison and really show the changes in her writing process.