Peer Review 14b for Fernando Coronado

The second peer review this week is Fernando Coronado's Content Outline.

An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed

• I made a outlining suggestion for Fernando.

An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how did you help them make their work better?

• Fernando talks solely of time management but I feel like what he said about time management is true for all of us. I advised him to bring in some elements into his self reflection where her truly personalized his essay to himself and talked about some of the unique parts of his writing process.

An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback

• According to the self-reflection rubric, we should focus on some of a list of possible topics (that first list of time management, research, editing, new tech, etc). I pointed out that Fernando should broaden out his paper a little. In his case it was too specific as it focused only on time management.

One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from

• I liked how his outline was organized by project. Personally, I'm still trying to decide if my outline should be organized by project or process.